Question:
Ok, another poem, please read and comment?
A lonely child
A field of blue
The tears that flow
The heart that bleeds
But no one cares
Now I write
The hidden truth
State of humanity
Does one care
Or need to care
No we don??t
That??s what most say
But that??s not true
And I write
To open eyes
And show the truth
Additional Details7 months ago
hey! My parents didn't abuse me, kay? Maybe I'm dark for some other reason, but stay away from my parents!
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is a dark poem, but definitely has a ring of truth to it.
The difficulty is the end. There is hope at the end but no explanation of why that hope exists. The poem says that people say they do not care, but that is a lie. It does not say why it is a lie. It does not mention that under that tough exterior that society sometimes expects most people have a heart.
Take care,
Troy