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Do you like my poem?

I search for meaning far & wide

Im coming apart from the inside

Im lonely, paranoid, sad & frustrated

If only i could get motivated

I no not how to take control

So much drama & rigmarole

If only i could find a way

To rise above this all, one day


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Cool poem. I like the first two lines the best. I think this describes many people...including me. Also, "drama and rigamarole" is an awesome and well chosen phrase, cause that really describes about 99% of human 'life', for better or worse.