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Hey a poem written by me ....pl.comment?

read not to write
write what you feel right
reading to write is not my type
so i read not to write

we all have right to write
make use of this right
rights are formed as are felt right

i and you have same rights
and so if you think you are right
you'll feel even i am right


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Well, in the sixth and seventh stanzas, and also in the eighth and ninth, you rhymed right with right. That doesn't sound good. Try replacing it with another rhyming word.