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Ok, yet ANOTHER poem, please read and comment.?

what I write are just poems, kay? don't take them THAT seriously.

Me,
energetic, lively.
Me,
happy-go-lucky.

Or is it me,
darkness and gloom,
Me,
colors of doom.

Two different mes,
sharing my mind,
two different mes,
of none is bind.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

not bad....
after i read it ....the first few things that comes to mind are.....
Jerkell & Hyde...
Gemini....
Person getting laid ALL the time vs. Person not getting any....
I like it.....2 different perspective could be on 1 person or comparison on 2 people....
good job....