Is this a good POEM?

Question:

Is this a good POEM?

its called walls,
let me in dont shut me out,stop building the walls around your heart.dont you see its hurting me i just cant seem to love you right.you say that you love me you say that your true while you build the walls around you.i cant take the pain so let me in dont turn your back i need a friend.by joanna

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

no, that is pretty terrible. but you don't have to feel bad. most poetry sucks. It doesn't feel very original. the use of metaphor would help it greatly.