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Please help ... my poems !?

This one is called hurt
I take it
I let him hit

I scream in pain
Eyes full of salt water rain

I'm so scared
I wish he cared

I pray with all my might
That i wont get hurt tonight

i have more but i only want to say this one b/c the others get more into my feelings ect ..


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

good stuff, but sometimes the best poems are the ones that are full of feeling now I'm curious about seeing the others.