Question Home |
Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Check out my poem and tell me how it is!!!!?Question: Check out my poem and tell me how it is!!!!?Mixed emotions unsure feelings Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's obviously intense feeling in this poem, but you use a lot of cliches. Could you think of more original ways to express your feelings -- maybe describe some of the good things, and how they went wrong? I know many people will relate to what you've written. |