What do you think of this silly poem?

Question:

What do you think of this silly poem?

what if

one day i was thinking
what if today wasn't today
what if tommoro wasn't tommoro
what if the rain wasn't rain
what if this was big news
what would you think
what would you do
what if a banana wasn't a banana
what if a train wasn't a train
what if red meant go
and green ment slow
would the world stop turning
would it stay on today
boy, isnt my mind a wonderful place
but im glad todays today
to bad i cant say the same for the rain

P.S. hop you liked it

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7 months ago
REVISHON

what if

one day i was thinking
what if today wasn't today
what if tomorrw wasn't tomorrow
what if the rain wasn't rain
what if this was big news
what would you think
what would you do
what if a banana wasn't a banana
what if a train wasn't a train
what if red meant go
and green ment slow
would the world stop turning
would it stay on today

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its ok i like the first version better.