Question:
What do you think of this poem?
If you don't like it don't comment. I'm 13 and I think I have found what I'm good at
I looked at you as a hero
You looked at me as a friend
We didn??t really know each other yet we had a connection
Music was my life being perfect was yours
Three yeas later you lost your life and I lost a friend
Til?? this day your face appears in every direction
Your voice seems to travel along
My mind has gone into a fading blizzard
But my soul fly??s in an even flow
If I could see you just one more time I would let myself go
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hey you, ya know in life you're always going to get people who are going to bring you down. No matter how hard we try not everyone is going to like what we do. It's up to you to stick with it.
Do you like writing? Do you really think you're good at it? I certainly do. Nobody is perfect at the whole punctuation...spelling...and grammar thing. I'm so bad when it comes to that stuff and I've been writing for 15 years. I couldn't punctuate myself out of a wal-mart receipt. But I do so love to write, and I think you do too.
So you need to keep going and nourish the words of your heart, mind and soul. I think you have an exceptional and real talent. Don't let anyone ever tell you differently.
There is always going to be a jerk here and there but as you can see by some of the other answers...there's a lot of good people who know a good thing when they see it.
Keep on it, let it flow