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What do you guys think about this poem? Plus I need help with a title for it...?

When I first laid my eyes on you.
You changed everything about me.
My life,dreams,and my soul.

After that,all I ever wanted,
Was to be with you.
It became my number one goal.

We became friends,after getting
To know each other a bit.
I knew then it wasn't time to quit.

I'm really attracted to you.
And you know it's true.
But do you like me the way I like you?

I'll keep trying. But I guess I'll never know.
Only time will tell. Whether you'll
Say. "Yes" or you'll say. "No."


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's an okay poem, I think. The line "It became my number one goal" sounds a little impersonal, but I do like the wording of the last open-ended stanza. How about "Waiting for an Answer" or "To the Woman I Love" for a title?