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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > What do you guys think about this poem? Plus I need help with a title for it...?Question: What do you guys think about this poem? Plus I need help with a title for it...?When I first laid my eyes on you. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's an okay poem, I think. The line "It became my number one goal" sounds a little impersonal, but I do like the wording of the last open-ended stanza. How about "Waiting for an Answer" or "To the Woman I Love" for a title? |