Question:
Heres some poems..?
So here are some of my old writings.
I want to tell you
My best kept secret
That lingers in my head
All day
My secret love for you
Far past any friendship
That drives me crazy
All day
The looks you give me
are they just for me?
I want to look at them
All day
The jealous reaction
Just my over reaction?
Give me a sign
Today
I will asnwer to your call
If it's only for sure
You'll call back to it
Someday
Hello there pen
So how long has it been?
Since me feelings met this paper
Since I had a moment to savor
For they all have the same ends
"I'm glad we're just friends"
Why can't I speak?
Roll these words past my cheeks:
"You're wonderful, I love you"
Because I don't think you do
Those are two separte ones. They are pretty short cuz the paper I wrote them on was small. Tell me what you think you them. Good bad... whatever. I just want someone elses opinion. Thanks :)
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
they're ok for what they are; teen poems.
your writting will get better, have more depth, with age, and experience. keep working at it.