Question:
Is this poem good?? Any suggestions? Comments?
A wait,
and wait,
another week passes by.
My hope of him asking me out is thin.
Popular girls crowed him,
jocks hussel over.
Only get to talk to him 6th and 8th hour.
He is quiet funny,
how he makes me laugh.
Trying to make freethrows in the garbage can.
Raping isn't his strong suit,
Singing isn't either.
Sometimes I think he's trying to impress me,
or just being himself or neither.
Just talking to him makes my day,
If only we were more than "buddies"
and he would think of me as more than a friend,
my days wouldn't be so gloomy,
If he would just say it.
Would you go out with me?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's cute I think you spelled a couple words wrong though like Crowed isn't it supposed to be crowded?