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Is this poem good?

Hey, thanks! Please read the poem and tell me if it's good. Please give me some feedback:


Love eternal,
Love divine,
Say I??m yours,
And you??ll be mine.

From all I??ve known,
To all I knew,
None as perfect,
Perfect as you.

If I could,
Say the words,
The words that I feel.
Trust me darling,
Oh I would,
How deeply I??d reveal.

Love eternal,
Love divine,
Say I??m yours,
And you??ll be mine.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

very nice now do me a favor go to poetry.com n register it and anything else u write so ppl cant steal ur stuff and u get noticed like i did. mine are under the names ...danys betts and lenda betts if u would like to read mine