Thoughts and rating of my poem please?

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Thoughts and rating of my poem please?

In a dramatic sense, it all seems to mend together. Insight beyond the realm of space, at a higher elevation seemingly floating among the clouds. Grass becomes greener and the oceans?? waters bluer as the birds chirp their joyful songs. Days of stagnant joy stirred by the world??s emotion. The nights' drunken dizziness engulfs all. The crooked paths straightened by the sobering light of sunrise. Thoughts repetitive motions you witness?? latter recollections forgotten. Days, nights, forever more????

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7 months ago
no you hvnt read it somewhere before....
you may have read one of my other poems which has a similar style

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"There is not a particle of life which does not bear
poetry within it" - Gustave Flaubert

...beautiful.

.pEace.