Opinions on my poem?

Question:

Opinions on my poem?

Here in this time and always
you are the loved and the looked on
it is in you to be wanted
all this is laboured to be
distant - the distance we
drew out for reason
that ugly season that suffocates
all the others of our life now
we who rush the river
where went that ease
with which we did everything
without prelude or result
but with honesty and love.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i think it's nice... i mean poetry is really subjective so everyone will see it differently. But it's pretty... not too weird... not too cliche.