What do you think of this poem I wrote? I don't have a title for it yet.?

Question:

What do you think of this poem I wrote? I don't have a title for it yet.?

They walk on the beach together hand in hand,
Tickling there feet is the soft snow white sand.

She looks at him and he looks back at her,
They both smile not believing where they were.

For nothing lites there path but the moon and stars,
Neither ever feeling at all like this by far.

The only sound is the ocean waves crashing in,
When all of a sudden he stops; she looks at him.

He says, I never want this feeling to change!
Out of no where he wakes up with a bang!!

He sits up while reality finally sets in,
Reality is dark, and gloomy and oh so grim.

His love is gone forever, living on the other side,
The thought of living without her, he doesn't want to try.

Then he remembers all the good times they had,
All the smiles, and laughs with so very few bad.

She is in a better place he reminds himself,
That very simple thought fills him up with wealth.

For he got to experience something that very few do,
The feeling of someone saying, "I love you"

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg i got the shivers when i read that!! its amazing!!!
i would call it "the gloomy truth," but that sorta makes it sound like it is going to be a sad gloomy poem. it is so sweet and romantic tho!!