Critique my story plz?

Question:

Critique my story plz?

plz email me a himynameisbob77@yahoo.com so I can send it to you. I really need an impartial critique and friends and family arent capable of that. if you know any sites that can critique my story also that would be nice.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I highly suggest writing.com. They have free and paid memberships and many of the writers there become as close as family, reviewing each others' works and offering tons of support.