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Help me with my poem. if this is so impressive?

There??s a sudden change in my life
Especially when you came with smiles
I don??t even see that I am the smiling type
But when you came, my life then excite.

We even not seen yet each other in person
But I know and I feel you??re a nice guy
I can proved it the way you gave me attention
Every time we talk and greet each other HI??.

Someday, god will set us in the same direction
Somewhere, in a place with mix emotion
Somehow, not today, but I??m sure it will be a start of good relation??


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Roses are Red
Violiets are Blue
You've already written the damn thing
What the heck to you want us to do?