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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Same poem i posted before..but i revised it?Question: Same poem i posted before..but i revised it?"Bloody Majesty" 7 months ago 7 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i'm not captivated by it or anything but it is better than anything i've read today. i like the subject matter- it's unusual in comparison to anything i see here in answers, but like i've said to almost everyone today, you need more original language. it can't just be like something removed from a short story and broken up into half scentences to look like a poem. it has to be beautiful or original or something that leaves me enrapt. |