What do you guys think of my poem?

Question:

What do you guys think of my poem?

Hiding behind a mask
Unable to carry out the simplest task
Wounded and healthy
Lazy and stealthy
Sleep
Sleep a little while

Hiding from yourself
Keeping your thoughts on a shelf
Clueless and suspicious
Pleasant and vicious
Think
Think for a little while

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

As a reader of many great poets I wont lie it's not that great, but you sound very young so dont quit. Everyone started somewhere.