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What do you think of my poem?

Its like a farie tale for you
Yes, for you
But for me its reality
Cause I??ve realized now
I??ll never be desired

He tells you you??re beautiful
While I chat it up with onliners
Probably all perverts
But I refuse to believe it
Its better just to think its real

Because there was never a guy
To tell me my eyes matched the skies
Or the ground we would sit upon
When my lips he??ll kiss upon
But I??ll never be loved upon

Never a person
In the world
Or one made up
Would tell me
They want me
Only me
Just me
Because
I??m a nobody


I wrote it just now. Kinda what I'm feeling. Tell me how you fell about it. I just wanted to post it.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Good..but you are a lonely person ..the last phrase was you said you were a nobody. You are somebody if you wrote this also talented. It takes a person who thinks they are a nobody to be somebody. Just take your talents and write a song. You have it within you to do this. Thanks and I enjoyed it. I love poems ..and stories about real life.