Could you rate another of my poems out of 10 please?

Question:

Could you rate another of my poems out of 10 please?

Sewn Together...

Our drunken bodies lie forever,
Our hands they are sewn together,
Im half awake and watch you sleep,
I have no need to count the sheep.

Too drunk to see the world around me
But all I need is right beside me.
So its alright to forget about the morning,
And all the things that tomorrow will need sorting.
Cause right now in this drunken light,
I am yours all the night.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's nice. You should write it again from your partner's prospective. 7.75.