What do you think of this poem?

Question:

What do you think of this poem?

i wrote a free-verse poem, like some people suggested for me to do than struggling for my poem to rhyme...

what do you think of this poem?

Life is a road we take
You start from the beginning
Not knowing where the road ends
You'll come to a road that's bumpy
The other one smooth...
You'll be confused which way t go...
No matter whta you do though,
You'll be hurt too
Take life as it goes...
Keep going ang going...
Once you've reach the end,
Ask yourself this:
Was my life worth living?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is a good first attempt??a starting point for this poem. You can spice it up a bit with metaphors or similes: describe the conditions of the roads beyond bumpy and smooth. Ending with the rhetorical question keeps the poem alive in the reader??s mind.