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Poem....ending?

As i walk down the long dark hallway
Chills go down my spine
Mysterious figures watching my every move
I try to run but they enter my body
Taking complete controll over me



What is a good ending for this poem?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

As I walk down the long, dark hallway
Chills go down my spine
Mysterious figures watching my every move
I try to run but they enter my body
Taking complete control over me

I feel the gripping strength around my neck
My thoughts are slowly slipping away
They are feeding on my soul

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