Question:
Ur opinion?
my friend wrote this poem and i was just wondering what other ppl thought about it.
Please, Just stop.
I don't want to know
what you do with her.
I don't want to know
why you won't choose me.
Ugh, just stop!
Stop invading my mind.
and please just leave.
I can't take anymore lies.
There will be no more cries,
no more sighs.
Just stop, and go away.
And maybe then I'll be okay.
But God, will I ever be?
Gosh, I just don't know.
I want to be tough,
and show I don't need you
Even as a friend.
Even if I have to lie
as you lied to me.
God,just stop!
Stop making me scream.
Stop making me hate you.
Stop saying its over,
stop telling me I've lost a friend.
God, isn't it so unfair
that you get to be happy?
when all you leave me with
is a broken heart?
God, just stop.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's not a poem, that's a cliche.