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Ur opinion?

my friend wrote this poem and i was just wondering what other ppl thought about it.

Please, Just stop.

I don't want to know

what you do with her.

I don't want to know

why you won't choose me.

Ugh, just stop!

Stop invading my mind.

and please just leave.

I can't take anymore lies.

There will be no more cries,

no more sighs.

Just stop, and go away.

And maybe then I'll be okay.

But God, will I ever be?

Gosh, I just don't know.

I want to be tough,

and show I don't need you

Even as a friend.

Even if I have to lie

as you lied to me.

God,just stop!

Stop making me scream.

Stop making me hate you.

Stop saying its over,

stop telling me I've lost a friend.

God, isn't it so unfair

that you get to be happy?

when all you leave me with

is a broken heart?

God, just stop.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That's not a poem, that's a cliche.