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I wrote this for an old flame a long time ago and reposted it on a webpage. Wondering if I should toss it.?

Me and you,

We're rebels of the current world view
nobody cares about us
cept those that have to
and us,
a world
a whole galaxy it seems
your star meets mine
and we meld in between
stardust turns to plasma
while day turns to night
you and me become
binary
creating dual light
dual worlds where the folk
walk with four legs and four feet.
Our people will see with eyes
too wide for this debris.


We're inside of that space
where God meets mind
where mind meets thought
where I becomes we
and we becomes you.

maybe we're just crazy
Nah, we're just in tune.
Me and you,
we're just in tune.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The binary galaxy bit doesn't seem to go with the being in tune bit.

But you should never "just toss" anything that means something to you. If nothing else, keep a copy of it in a scrapbook for a memento of your girlfriend.