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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Okay. This poem.. does anyone like it?Question: Okay. This poem.. does anyone like it?Give me some constructive criticism if you know enough about poetry to do so. Otherwise, whether you like it or not is enough for me. :) Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love it. I real poem. To be honest, When I saw the heading I thought to myself "Sweet, a stupid emo kid with a stupid emo suicide poem for me to poke fun at". But it's excellent! It's not very often that you run into people writing real poetry instead of a suicide note. It's glorious that you're able to capture his emotions without sounding like a whinny dipshit. I really really like: |