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is this a good poem

i need a good ending

Shadows lurk in a world of there own.
Realm of the shadow is black with a purple sky
It is the place that shadows do not die
Place where shadows make black dye
Hear their devilish cry


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Last line (2 lines, really):

The shadows that lurk
in a world of their own.

[Please correct the first line: you want "their" not "there"}