Is it good?

Question:

Is it good?

Sharp

my feelings are so intense
i have no middle zone
either in love or left alone
..............................
spent my life on the safe side
never took a dangerous ride
and i have never tried
.............................
cause i know the heart of mine
so sharp like the sunshine
if you let it down never to be fine
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

yes, its very nice - I think you are saying that you're an extremist? But I don't understand the last line 'never to be fine'. I love poetry, your poem is very piercing- you get the impact straight away.