I made a poem, please comment?

Question:

I made a poem, please comment?

SO CRUEL

So cruel is society,
When a boy hides his feelings for a girl,
And she hides hers, just for him,
So he won??t be laughed at,

So cruel is this world,
When two lovers do not say a word,
To avoid the teasing
even if the tears filled their eyes

Why is everyone so cruel?
If only they knew the love between us.
If only thy weren??t so cruel,
Then they would know.
-squirrelfreak

I'm not really sure if it is any good at all, but a I needed a way to get this off my mind a little.
(i'm not tyring to ryhm anything, it is supposed to be free verse)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is a very good poem. Eventhough society is cruel, at the end is your choice is what really matters. So do not let other people ruin you. What is going to happen to you at the end, and where you are going go at the end, depends on you.