What is your opinion about this poem?

Question:

What is your opinion about this poem?

This is something I wrote.I am an amateur,I am 16 and I would please like your opinion about it.Thanks.

If Only

I do not mind letting you go
with what you have taken from me
the memories you leave behind can last me a lifetime
the moments we have shared can see me through
if only you will still come in my dreams
as you used to??
I do not mind not following you
to the ends of the world
to spend all my breathing moments in your presence
if only you will hold me when I die
and whisper ??I love you??, even if it is a lie
for one last time??
I do not mind knowing you are happy elsewhere
and will be, without me-
after all, one smile from you compensates for everything I have got
(however clich㩠it might sound, my love)
if only I can see a tear in your eye
as I fade into darkness??
forever.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it's very nice.. don't listen to kittyrogers.. he's one of those people that see poetry as letters and numbers instead of a souls expression.. he sees your words yet is blind to the beauty they hold.. poor guy. sure.. if you wanted to be published or something it would be a whole new game.. but how many people write to be published? it's for you and anyone who cares to share with you.. good job.