Question:
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I??ve done wrong
Its all my fault
Its to late to
Fix it
If I didn??t open up
My mouth
Those knives wouldn??t
Have flown out and into
Your heart
I cant say I know
How you feel
I don??t
How did I hurt you
How could I have done that
Don??t forgive me
I wouldn??t
If I was
You
How could I hurt you
You did no wrong
Ill try to
Blame it on
You
But it was
Me
That??s another thing wrong
And when I bring up you faults
Although they are
Imaginary
Cruel
We??re not the same
I wish I could go back
And take back
What I said
To you
My fault not
Yours
Don??t beat yourself up
Additional Details5 months ago
I wrote it today. Suggestions are loved for improvements.
5 months ago
Free verse poem. Thank you for the grammar error.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not too shabby.
"you" should be "your" though. :)