Does this sound like a good poem?

Question:

Does this sound like a good poem?

Okay I wrote this in like five minutes for my computer class. Actually I'm in class right now I just have free time. We start our final exam in twenty minutes I just wanted to know what other people thought I was going throught my old files. My name is Ashley and I'm 15. I'm a freshman in hs. I live in the U.S. I just wanted to know if people thought this was good from my age, country, etc.

Enclosed Space
Enclosed Space is my only dimension
I don??t do this just for attention
Enclosed space is my only friend.
Enclosed space I have to do this again
Everyone around me is way to near
Trying to destroy everything that I hold dear
Enclosed space just leave me be
Enclosed space get away from me

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Damn! Didn't hear a thing. Had to read every word.