This is another one of my poems?

Question:

This is another one of my poems?

At the edge of the universe
there is no life, no people,
but there is a sense of humility,
it's humbling, and sad

The edge of the universe,

Is where I was born,
Where I live,
And where I will die

I am the edge of the universe

And I will swallow you whole,
and spit you out,
away from your mother and father,
brothers and sisters,
everyone

But when you look back,
at where you came from,
and what you've left behind

You will smile, and welcome the darkness

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Overall, I liked it. There are a few words and lines here and there that could use a great deal of polishing, i.e.- "i am the edge of the universe" and "and I will swallow you whole" are two examples of lines that just don't seem to flow very well. Read it aloud and see what you can come up with for revisions. Just remember, it's YOUR poem, so it's up to you whether you choose to take my advice or anyone elses'.