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Need help with this one can you guyz tell how i write this tome?

OBLIGATION

if thee say
would i never leave thee side
so what say you
if thee desire then
would i put all the world to thee steps
so what say you
if thee wishes
would i put all the happiness to thee heart
so what say you
if thee the say that thee love is not an obligation for me
even than i would never leave thee side
so what say you.
so what say you......

~lost all~


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

First off, that's a 'poem', not a 'tome'.
Secondly, what do you mean 'how I write' it? You wrote it. What's the problem?
Third, 'thee side' makes no sense. It's 'thy side', 'thy steps', 'thy heart' etc.

'if thee desire' is correct, 'thee steps' is not.