A short Poem. What do you think?

Question:

A short Poem. What do you think?

Judging Eyes.

Those Judging eyes that burn through like laser beams.

Those judging eyes that peer from a distance, mocking your malady. Looking, watching, staring...
Those Judging eyes with their equipment with their instruments of ridicule going to work on your spirit - your esteem. Those judging eyes bleeding from the strain! watering from the stress of your, goings on. Those judging eyes that are dead yet wide open, beholding your vice, your deeds. Those Judging eyes that will gaze you into the ground that will follow you into your grave. Those Judging eyes...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I thought that it was relly good. it got me out of my seat kinda good. and the clif hanger is a great add on to the story. you really should put that in to a contest. and i dont just like any poetry. i am very picky with my poetry so good job!!!!