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What do you think of my poem?

Human's Disturbance


Sitting by the water's edge,
Watching the world go by,
While wild, rugged waves
Pound against the shore.
As the sun sets the makr of night,
I watch the aurora shimmer above.
Wolves howl mercilessly,
Their cries resounding from afar,
As a cool, swift breeze
Carries on from the ocean.
But even the most wonderful things
Are never meant to last.
Ships disrupt nature's peace
As a deep foghorn blows,
Waking those asleep.
Nature does know best,
Yet still we interfere.
We try too hard to change
What needn't be altered .
Go enjoy it now
For soon, it may be too late,
And have changed forevermore.

Please don't just tell me, "it's okay" "it's good" or "i don't like it". Please give reasons why, as in constructive criticism. Be honest. Thanks :)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

you are apoet , really poet . you reminded me with "dover beach".when i read it,you took me out from the wold to that of your poem.isaw such a striking scene of sunset,got afraid of wolves cries that come from the unseen" from a far" ,heard the nasty sound of the ships that attaked the peaceful nature,and lived in the enviroment of the poem that contains wave,sunset,breez,WOLVIES,ship... please let me live there for ever before "it may be too late"