Question:
Do you think that is good or no?
Affair
we met in the wrong place,
in the wrong time and for others
our meeting is a crime
i knew that will not last
and everything between us
should end so fast
though i knew all of this
what this will cost me
and what i 'll miss
i loved you in a painful way
i wished deep inside me
that you will stay
my immunity against you
was zero and you were
my one and only hero
then it was time to leave
how fast was that still
can not believe !
and from that day on
i can't numb the feeling
of being alone
and each time i hear a passionate
rhyme i wish you'll be back
and we can resume our crime
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it is ok if this is your feeling.
It certainly conveys a mood.
However, the end is a bit awry, does it have to end on CRIME?
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