Do you think this a good poem?

Question:

Do you think this a good poem?

I am in the 6th grade,and I entered this poem to a conest.Do you think I have good chances of winning?

"Healed"

Knowing you were gone,
tore me up inside,
I just couldn't let you see,
all the feelings I put aside.

When I couldn't talk to you,
I about died,
and every night,
I sat on my bed and cried.

Seeing you,
made my heart skip a beat,
and when I thought about you,
I couldn't even sleep.

Being away from you,
changed me so much,
I was missing you,
and your loving touch.

You're back in my life,
and I learned to deal,
my hear was torn,
now its healed.

~Jessica Pelfrey~

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

For a 6th grader it is inspiring! You have talent. As for winning, Sure you have a great chance to win, but I am not your judge. I hope the judges will be kind to you as you do have talent! I hope the adults in your life continue to encourage you in all that you do!

=0) Good Job and Good Luck!