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Does this sound good?

I'm in my early teens with a sort of tendency to use poetry in writing whenever I can. How does this sound? Do you think it willl work?

I'm not good with words,
so I thought I should write.
A feeling inside me;
my guiding light.

So, I'm not much a poet,
but less I'm a speech.
And my woords tell a story,
that talk cannot reach.

To get to my point,
I ask you this.
Youj know where it's going,
but not where it is.

Would you like to go out
sometime in the near?
All I want is an answer,
just something to hear.

So just grant me this,
whether a yes or a no.
All I'd like is an answer,
It won't get me down low.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's well done, I hope it does the job for you.