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Poetry help?

Hey i don't know where to continue with this poem can you help?

You can??t stand being wrong,
You think your voice is a song,
You can brag, oh yes its so,
But even if i try, I try im be marked as low.

You can make me feel all happy
And can sometimes be a bit sappy
But then with others, you change your beat
To match the rhythm of the their feet.

But the way you act,
Is in fact
In a bit of a muddle
The notes of your life are a big mud puddle.

Your mouth slurs when your feet dance
And its all repetition and no chance
The notes of the pages are 1, 2, 3, 4
But yours just hop out the door!

Am I just a disease?
And you can just step away from me with ease?

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5 months ago
i really like the questions so far

i forgot to say what it was about its about a friend and how she acts difficultly around me infront of other people and one on one


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Running on the road ever so fast.
Getting away from me to hide your past