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Does this poem make me sound suicidal?

I am in a world that is no longer turning,
I??m that girl still waiting for something
I wonder when I will awake, from this endless dreaming
I hear a voice telling me to stop sleeping
I see myself waiting for something,
Things just can??t be achieved until I stop sleeping
I want to open my eyes to the world that will start spinning
I am in a world that is no longer turning,
I??m that girl who is still waiting for something

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5 months ago
I feel suffocated and I??m drowning
I??ll touch sky when I spread my wings to fly
I worry about where I can find my lost wings,
Every time I try to fly I lose them again
Out of my sight, forced out of my mind
I cry because I??m drowning in people??s doubt
Caused by my own self doubt
I pretend that I am happy with what I am
When I alone try to understand
I am in a world that is no longer turning
I??m that girl who is still waiting for something

I understand that I??m not perfect,
But no one gives me the chance to try
I say that I don??t care even when I can??t let it go
I dreamed for too long
It??s time to make this real
I??ll try to fly even without my lost wings
I hope, no I WILL succeed because this is no longer a dream
I will make this happen
Just give me
One chance
I am in a world no longer turning
I??m that girl still waiting for something.

Lithium

5 months ago
a teacher made me go to the counselor after she read it
Kinda scary

This poem isn't written in my point of view. The point of view : girl with abusive parents and she lives in a town

No I'm not suicidal in any way shape or form
I don't usually write poetry but I write it when I really feel like writing a particular feeling/image
My inspiration comes from basically anything. (it usually comes when I day dream)

I'm also in a phase where a lot of stuff I write is dark and deep

I guess I'm growing up ^-^


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it kind of sounds like a love poem not suicidal though