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What do you think about my poems?

If there is anything that you dont like please tell me

Cuddled in your arms
is where i want to be
everywhere i look, i know your watching me
your the sun and the stars,
and my shadow on the ground
your the whisper in the wind
that sweet and silent sound
your spirit helps me up
when im feeling down
your the leafs on the ground
that are every shade of brown
i know your everywhere
keeping an eye on me
you'll always be in my heart
for ever and eternity.


This is titled My Dog
Shes zaney and crazy
a little nutty too
only two pounds
no bigger than my shoe
she eats everything you give her
even the things you dont.
she loves when you play
and hates when you wont
she loves to chew on hangers
and everybodys things
she gets on my nerves sometimes
and chewed my favorite ring
shes only two pounds
and brings me to my knees
everytime she goes potty she gets a piece of cheese
shes a pretty spoiled dog
nothing can compare
the only thing is she makes me pull hai

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5 months ago
** but the only thing is, she makes me pull my hair **

(Thats last line)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Don't listen to "The One" He has problems!
I really like it!
Keep t Up!

I bet he couldn't make one as good as you! You rock and ur cool!

Don't worry because I will report him as abusing right now!

Have a great day!