POEM! What should go next?

Question:

POEM! What should go next?

Help! I dont know what to put next!

Cuddled in your arms
is where i want to be
everywhere i look
i know your watching over me
your the sun and the stars
and my shadow on the ground
your the wisper in the wind
.....? WHAT NOW?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

just replce the first comment you know

that still and silent sound to >that "sweet" and silent sound
you know the sweet silent wind
"that sweet and silent sound"