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Is this a good blank verse poem for an obituary?

Some say,
Pictures
Last forever.
To bad that we don??t
But the memories that we have,
Will last forever.
Memories are as a circle.
Never ending.
Nor ne??er fading
These memories,
are precious as diamonds and rubies.
But, are not worth no money.
But are worth cherishing forever.
Memories of laying out at night,
watching the star,
eating out for a Sunday dinner,
those memories shall
never
be forgotten

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4 months ago
LOL! No, it is for a project! In my class we have to write our future obituary! and I decided to write a poem with it!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i love it up to ...cherishing forever. you should end it there.