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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > My poem - could you give, suggestions opinions?Question: My poem - could you give, suggestions opinions?Weeds cry Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It really need work. and it's very ordinary. Not to say you did not put thought into this, but it's rather trite, at least in my opinion. If I give you too many suggestions or my actual opinion beyond what I have said, I am fairly sure, like so many others on this site, you will become very angry. Here is the deal: People always claim to want honest opinion and critiques on their poetry and other writings, and then when they get it, most become very angry/emotional, and begin reporting those who do not like their poetry, and then begin insulting those people. I am not saying you would do this, but I think it's best not to ask others what they think unless you are prepared for real criticism and can take those opinions that are not necessarily flattering to your owrk. I find most people cannot. |