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What do you think of my new poem?

Bird.

A bird is chirping
a perky little tidbit
outside my window.
Over and over.
It??s 3:34 AM
He wasn??t there yesterday.
Remember Proust
Knew nothing about music either.

Why won??t he stop.
Oh why won??t he stop.
God damn it I have to be to work in the morning.
Do they train these goddamn things.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Made me laugh - I like the way your choppy style mimics the annoying bird!