Does this sound good?

Question:

Does this sound good?

I sadly sit here on my round rock next to the slippery stream that moves at such a pecaeful pace that is quickly quiet but still draws me to a sorrowful slumber of dreadful dreams that brings notorious nightmares

I know most people are not into poetry but if you are you might like it

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's great!!
I can almost imagine myself sitting there, feeling sad or melencholy. It reminds me of myself last summer, when i was really depressed with my life, i would go sit on a rock in the middle of a river and cry....most nights i wouldn't sleep for fear of nightmares....
...i guess i can really connect to this.