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Is this a good poem?

You are the rain
I am the cloud
Where ever you are
I'm think of you

The way that you bring
Joy to my life and
The way when I am mad
You make me glad ...Thank you


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The 1st paragraph isn't bad; almost Haiku. The second stanza - not so good; mad and glad are too simplistic for describing the emotion you want to get across.