What do you think of this POEM?

Question:

What do you think of this POEM?

In the garden, the cat dodges pricks and vines.
In the garden, the silence stops at the brige where the water splashes upon the rocks
In the garden, the plants are cut oh, so perfectly.
In the garden, is where I love to stay

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, but maybe you should add a little more description. Like, "cool, crystal water". But I like it! Very peaceful. :)